| #1 ~Talon~[27784] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| No first comment for you! |
| #2 <font color="red"><b>aP_TaKtIkS</font>[27786] |
| term3-050.speakeasy.net |
| huk? |
| #3 yang_yang[27787] |
| sdn-ar-020casfrMP206.dialsprint.net |
| yes huk... |
| #4 RootBreaker[w][27788] |
| slip-32-101-128-46.mn.us.prserv.net |
| Nice report... but it was sometimes hard to tell who was doing things because you used the passive voice. Example: The bottom right island was expanded to. Sorry about the english lesson. |
| #5 ~Talon~[27789] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| It's not me! It was all ummm... yang_yang's fault! Kill him! He messed up my pretty BR! |
| #6 [z]RubberDucky[27791] |
| dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net |
| Kinda short for 2hour long game |
| #7 ~Talon~[27803] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| The last 45 was hella boring, nothing happened except 4 zergling drops 2 muta attacks and wraith scouting. |
| #8 Baxter-O'Bixby[27809] |
| adsl-63-195-119-107.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Maybe I misread the BR, but did teal eventually win after being knocked down to just one floating CC? Because that's pretty damn impressive. |
| #9 ~i~Dragon~[27812] |
| s03.austin.ibm.com |
| Um, another thing, the pictures cover up all the words in some places, and the passive voice makes it hard to see who is preforming the action... |
| #10 ~Talon~[27813] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| Pictures cover up words? |
| #11 yang_yang[27821] |
| sdn-ar-020casfrMP206.dialsprint.net |
| damn u talon!!!.. i didnt do anything..and u accuse me???...what has the world become??.. im going to tell my mom about this.. and u can bet on ur mom receiving a phone call from my mom.. hmph... meanie.. |
| #12 Barage[27829] |
| dialup-63.210.77.42.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
That's a game to call your own.
Good br. Although the folks are right about the passive voice (instead of "Skittles is rallying his Medirines..." use "Skittles rallys his Medirines...") Be bold!
Of course, when you see the folks in BR.com nitpicking your report you know you did good and they are just getting desperate in finding things to bash :P. The pics helped in keeping the mood of the plot (if that makes any sence. It's easier to feel the shock of suddenly seeing 3 bcs charge at you when you turn the page and get shocked by a picture of 3 bcs slaming a hatchery). Also I noticed you aimed at getting the explosions. No need to limit yourself so strictly (big armies or just something that catches your eye work as well) but very nice job. Oddly enough, I realy liked the pics of the bunker falling flat to lings, but sometimes I'm just easily amused :). Someone needs to put in an 8 to make this a 7.5 at least.
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| #13 ~Talon~[27830] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| ME = GOSU! SHUT UP! |
| #14 ~Talon~[27831] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| Have faith in Gosu <s>Mogalin</s> ~Talon~! |
| #15 yang_yang[27846] |
| sdn-ar-021casfrMP212.dialsprint.net |
| ~Talon~ = my bitch |
| #16 SqueakyMonkey[27857] |
| osh1-69c.twcny.rr.com |
Nice BR, very Mark4-ish, finely blended with some Defsab, and just a hint of TheRubberDucky.
Dear God I've gone insane. |
| #17 ~Talon~[27866] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| OK, I have no idea what you just said but whatever. |
| #18 ytineres[27903] |
| ppp-207-193-238-59.snantx.swbell.net |
| I think you should have gotten a 8 or 9 |
| #19 TheCabbit[28160] |
| bgm-57-110.stny.rr.com |
| What was the map......? |
| #20 ~Talon~[28174] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| It said temple ffa in the title if you didnt see... |
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