| #1 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[18931] |
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| This was meant to be the narrative of a Dark Templar on the map Dark Temple. If you didn't get the start locations from the pictures, Deschain was 12 o'clock and myco was 9 o'clock. I hope you enjoyed my report! |
| #2 (cache4.ihug.co.nz)[18935] |
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| I am second I rule and you all drool! |
| #3 JPaikman (huru59.wuh.wustl.edu)[18937] |
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Good report,
Sorry it couldn't be a two-on-two : Fear`Factory doesn't like observers :-(
JPaikman/ObiWanJebroni |
#4  (fjwilson.reshall.uc[18949] |
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| me likey |
| #5 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[18951] |
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| If you REALLY likey, you given mesa a niner, but boo hoo me no good 'nuff fo niner. *Sniff* *Sniff* |
| #6 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[18952] |
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| I think an 8 is good stuff, but I would appreciate some pointers and such so that next time I will actually get a 9. Thanks. |
| #7 Remlin (206.233.180.105)[18964] |
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| I liked the first person perspective in the tale. It makes it very exciting to read. 'Thumbs-up'. |
| #8 Piks_Flare (ppp9060.on.bellglobal.com)[18965] |
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| Hey ~Talon~ nice report...can you report me in a 1v1? |
| #9 Pika_Flare (ppp9060.on.bellglobal.com)[18966] |
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| Hey ~Talon~ nice report...can you report me in a 1v1? |
| #10 JSH (nscs51p16.remote.umass.edu)[18981] |
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| At first I didn't think it was a good idea to give away the outcome at the beginning, but after reading through the whole thing, I realize that it was from the perspective of a Protoss warrior reporting to his superiors. Therefore it made sense. :) I thought you told the narrative very well although it seemed the game was in hand by the Protoss most of the time. |
| #11 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19000] |
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Thanks for the comments everyone, but I hop my next report will get a nine.
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| #12 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19001] |
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Thanks for the comments everyone, but I hope my next report will get a nine.
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| #13 SSn39 (quincy-ip-1-72.dynamic.ziplink.net)[19009] |
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| Your first person view was very good at telling the story, but more maps of the action would have been apreciated, which probably kept you from getting a higher score. Also, you didn't have much of a game to report on, since it was only one sided. |
| #14 Syndrome Zed (wmblab-Rye.neuro.emory.edu)[19010] |
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| The only thing I would change - a little more detail in the text. Good pix, nicely written, but there were occasional gaps where it made you wonder. For instance, you mentioned the corsairs shooting down overlords, but you don't mention that they were driven off, since if he came at you later with a hydra drop he must have had some left around to take up the slack. Little things like that disrupt the flow of the story sometimes, so a little more detail and I'd think it'd get a 9. Nice work! |
| #15 Fractal_Wave (24.65.24.97.bc.wave.home.com)[19035] |
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What .Praetor said. Twice
All the best,
Fractal_Wave
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| #16 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19038] |
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| Heh. |
| #17 Drefsab (rc71.Rmax1.globalsite.net)[19046] |
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Talon, I think a few things might have contributed to the 8.
1) 1vs1 isn't a hard thing to report
2) Seems like every report on this page is on Dark Temple
3) It wasn't a very close game.
It was very creative, the first person perspective was interesting, however, I still prefer to have the outcome of the battle come at the end instead of the beginning.
Don't get me wrong though, it still was a very good report and it looked like you did a lot of work on it. Good Job!
Dref |
| #18 Huh? (bender.airswitch.com)[19082] |
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Nice br, I enjoyed it immensley. LIke Drefsab said, 1v1's are not all that hard to report, and they're not very interesting to read. Although the first person perspective put the whole battle in a new light, 2v2's always seem more...scary. You can be creaming one person and then die from their best friend. 1v1's lack that element of survive, especially when they're so one sided.
That was a very nice br, keep em coming |
| #19 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19083] |
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| Well, my last report took 4-5 hours, a good day of writing and picture editing... this one was shorter though, and on my other one I had to get help from my dad. So.... uhhh.... thanks for the pointers. |
| #20 WaSSupNoW (spider-tl033.proxy.aol.com)[19124] |
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| hey hey i think this is the talon i know- were you part of the 4aiur clan before? I remember we played vs. Cheerio and kik dood. That was fun. Those guys never answer my emails anymore tho so I can't play with them. Did you leave that clan thingie? It seemed like the guys were cool and that web page is da shit. |
| #21 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[19212] |
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| Gee... Uhhh... I have no idea what you are talking about. |
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