| #1 Phiber~Optik (dt031nb5.san.rr.com)[17472] |
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| 1st Comment YAY !! Now to read the post |
| #2 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[17474] |
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| yay more pl:c!!!!!!!!!! |
| #3 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[17475] |
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| omg totally great man |
| #4 Phiber~Optik (dt031nb5.san.rr.com)[17476] |
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Excellent .Praetor !!
I love reading these chronicles- they are great. Keep it up! |
#5  (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17478] |
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| MAN! I leave for a minute or two to comment on Cashew's story and there are FOUR comments already! I love this site. Did you guys actually read the thing? I bet there will be another comment by the time I'm done typing here =). |
| #6 Phiber~Optik (dt031nb5.san.rr.com)[17479] |
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| Yep, I read it, and here is another comment!! |
| #7 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17481] |
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| Woohooo, more comments! |
| #8 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[17483] |
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| /me read the entire thing, it totlly r00ls man. Keep it up much longer plz ^^ |
| #9 Phiber~Optik (dt031nb5.san.rr.com)[17484] |
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| Lol 9 comments from only 3 ppl |
| #10 Hannibal (69user249.ctinets.com)[17486] |
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Hey, link to that war3 analysis doesn't work. I really love you so I want to see that production. Can you point me to a link that works?
www.wclegacy.com/war3/analysis
(ABOVE LINK DOES NOT WORK) |
| #11 SuperGeneral (cr732571-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com)[17487] |
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4 people now.
<a href="http://lightning.prohosting.com/~ss-omega/plc1.html">Phoenox Legion: Chronicle archive</a>
Heh he, ducky you forgot to plug our site!
Wicked as usual Prae. Keep em coming!
-SuperGeneral
<a href="http://lightning.prohosting.com/~ss-omega/">Space Station Omega</a>
http://connect.to/omega
:-) |
| #12 SuperGeneral (cr732571-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com)[17488] |
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BTW....
PL:C! PL:C! PL:C! PL:C! PL:C! PL:C! PL:C!
continue the chant =) |
| #13 1badassmarine (dialup2-2.solisys.com)[17489] |
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Dude, this story TOTALLY kicked ass. Keep it up! A really long story like this would be awesome. I have always wanted to read a good StarCraft story. Oh and I didn't see any errors.
1badassmarine
P.S. THAT WAS AWESOME!!! |
| #14 Sp|nE (dialup0562-pri.voicenet.com)[17490] |
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Too ... long ... hurts ... brain =[
I can barely read a damn far side comic, let alone a story this size based on starcraft. =p |
| #15 Crazylisk (CPE-24-192-8-44.vic.bigpond.net.au)[17492] |
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This piece rules like all the other ones. I've read your work over at both Legacy sites, and they're just as good, keep up the great work.
Crazylisk, the MAD and Insane ONE |
| #16 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17496] |
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| Thanks Drefsab, you tech-whiz you =). You know, it's nice when I learn new people are reading Phoenix Legion, like Sp|ne and 1badassmarine. You think this is long Sp|ne? You obviously haven't read Phoenix Legion. If 1badassmarine is interested, it's 100 pages or so. |
| #17 @@Walker (tc-sa2-12.ida.net)[17497] |
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Everyone needs to take just one minute and thank Praetor for his great work on these.
I know it gives me something worth looking at on the internet. |
| #18 @@Walker (tc-sa2-12.ida.net)[17498] |
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Everyone needs to take just one minute and thank Praetor for his great work on these.
I know it gives me something worth looking at on the internet. |
| #19 Riffon (spider-tp032.proxy.aol.com)[17500] |
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| Whoa! I TOTALLY ripped you off! I'd completely forgotten that the word "Chronicles" was in the name of your posts. Like, whoa. I think I'll change my string, if it becomes a string, to something like "The Riffon...., uh, String." Yeah, that'll work. |
| #20 [MrFurious] (bha10-s41.mtl.colba.net)[17502] |
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We see eye to eye on this Praetor.
The only reason I post Brs is to see the comments. Its like a drug...
Good job here man, I really liked the part about the carrier's nature. They should ask you to do the novel not that other guy...
Cheers,
MrFurious |
| #21 Drefsab (rc99.Rmax2.globalsite.net)[17508] |
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| See people, this is what happens when you leave your browser minimized while you play sc and then come back and start hitting refresh, back, forward, etc... |
| #22 [MrFurious] (bha2-s48.mtl.colba.net)[17510] |
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| I thought Palleon was publishing it for real, my mistake. |
| #23 Fractal_Wave (24.64.215.34.bc.wave.home.com)[17523] |
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Altogether now: 1, 2, 3
WE LOVE .PRAETOR
WE LOVE .PRAETOR
WE LOVE .PRAETOR
WE LOVE .PRAETOR
This.....is why I love BR.com. God, I wish I could write like that.
All the best,
Fractal_Wave
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| #24 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[17527] |
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| Praetor > Ducky |
| #25 FOS`Entaro`FOS (nova.singnet.com.sg)[17531] |
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.Praetor, you knew I love Phoenix Legion Chronicles. I read commented in every episode.
Entaro |
| #26 Warphead (johnny.bath.ac.uk)[17568] |
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Man, I just read chapter 7 of the main story too -- YEEEEE HAAAA =)
Good schtuff =D
Btw, comedic=comic
.Prator can't spell =)
Later |
| #27 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17586] |
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| Ah, dang. Where was that Warphead? Thanks everyone else! |
| #28 loserboye (24.66.200.212.ab.wave.home.com)[17595] |
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DON"T LEAVE ME OUTT
i say again praetor i think u write really well and sp|ne ?? well he just confused :P
well hurry up and update the pl series at that www.sclegacy.com cos that story is exciting too |
| #29 <font face="comic sans ms" font color="blue">TheTeckMan<font color="#452622"> (u[17598] |
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| <font face="comic sans ms" font color="blue">.Preator><u>everybody</u> hee hee excellent work I can't wait to read more! |
#30  (real.nauticom.net)[17615] |
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It was kind of ok, but it needs tons of pictures with captions, animations, a java game, and playable music from "The Sound of Music"... just try to keep that in mind.
YRM being serious now... very nice, maybe one of the best of the series. I bet the turrets and marines weren't firing at the end because of...
GAYWEB!!!
Right??? I think I'm right.
Go Pheonix Legion! Fight the Gay influence of the web. You must have this FFA game almost won right? This was a real game you were in wasn't it? |
| #31 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17616] |
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Yes, YourRoleModel, it is because of disruption web. The game is almost over. I see two, MAYBE three more chapters.
And for the last time, NO, this was not a real game. I used to play many FFA's on Ashrigo, but PL:C is wholly fictional.
Hey, I just had an idea from my own storyline =). Would Archons be the counter to a vulture-tank heavy-metal strat? Protoss should have templar, and mines don't do diddly to Archons. 'Course the vultures themselves might be dangerous... |
| #32 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17617] |
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| If it was an actual game, why would the two terrans not be using Brood War units? =) |
| #33 Mr.Newbie.2.U (dial104.ink.globesurfer.net)[17623] |
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| God ur a gay whiner, and the story was to long, so i give it a 10 in the gayster scale =D am i the only one with the balls to admit how much this sucked |
| #34 Annie47 (spider-wd064.proxy.aol.com)[17625] |
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| i know how you feel about not being apprecated .Preator, we spend all this time writing for what? a few (or a lot in your case =]) comments? So many other things we could be doing then writing. Hmmphh. |
| #35 DFA (spider-tk032.proxy.aol.com)[17627] |
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This was another great part to the chapter. It's always time well spent reading these! great job, and don't stop the battles!! heh off to play BW.
this is a 9+
DFA
btw when you finish this start another plz |
| #36 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17629] |
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Thanks guys. And I'm way ahead of you DFA. I bracket the 10 reports on the news page right now!
Mr. Newbie.2.U, I believe you are referring to the part about carriers. I do not actually think they are imbalanced, in fact I use them a lot. I am attempting to portray the fear they strike in marines and such. If you don't like it, too bad, but I'm betting you haven't read the first parts yet. That makes the story even longer =). |
| #37 Warphead (johnny.bath.ac.uk)[17644] |
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'Comedic' was in chapter 7 of the main story. When you're describing the dead sunken
Oh yeah, almost forgot
Moo2 > Civ2
Musn't forget =D |
| #38 Shadow (x115-4.reshalls.umn.edu)[17723] |
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Great story .Praetor! PLEASE keep them coming, because they give me something to do between my classes :)
Anyone who dares flame these stories deserves to get nuked, or worse. I think worse probably. Both these stories and the Phoenix legion story on SCLegacy are great. I'm just running into the same problem I always do with series(es)? (plural of series?): The fact that I'm always looking forward to the next one, AND IT ISN'T OUT YET! Oh well, I'll live.
Keep up the good work. |
| #39 FOS`Entaro`FOS (pulsar.singnet.com.sg)[17758] |
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| Forget her YRM, she is just trying to get attention. So if you said Mr.Newbie.2.U's mother rated this, this person's mother ain't a woman. You get what I mean? |
| #40 AnderKryst (edjproxy2.edwardjones.com)[17768] |
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| All hail .Praetor. :) |
| #41 BomberII15 (proxy-server.mamkschools.org)[17769] |
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Great stroy. I was wondering why SClegacy's legion read differently than this one, thanks for clearing that up. Once again great story, one of your best yet.
Later
BomberII15 |
| #42 Armpit (207.168.1.130)[17773] |
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| Great writing, good story-enough said. |
| #43 Johnny English (keyhole.ho.dupont.com)[17782] |
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This was crap.
You are way too full of yourself, my man.
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| #44 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[17788] |
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It was rated! A 9! Hot diggedy-dog!
I do my best Shadow. I suppose I sort of dug myself a hole with three story-lines, eh? Thanks Entary, Kryst, Bomber, Armpit, and even you Johnny. Here's to 50 comments. YEAH!! |
| #45 SuperGeneral (cr732571-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com)[18643] |
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| .Praetor, you make my fiction section complete :) |
| #46 Tashio[38603] |
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Great story, Nice change from the regular BR's.
About Archon's em No they would not be the solution for 1 reason EMP, bye bye all nice 350 shields. + even if no EMP Shields take full damage no matter what, so archons go POOF :)
Tashio |
| #47 [40246] |
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| Glad you liked it Tashio. You're right about the Archons of course. I found that out to my sorrow as a distressingly small group of vultures and ghosts popped several of my archons once. |
| #48 Jacos[45608] |
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I hate novells for 2 reasons, I can´t stop reading them and second I always want to get to the end quick to find out how it goes and when I finally get there I get mad because it didn´t last longer. And after starting to read the PL I surely want to see the end. But hopefully it will take a lot of time.
/Jacos |
| #49 Auz09[150359] |
| 66.237.245.230.ptr.us.xo.net |
.Praetor I know its been years since you've written here, but I just stumbled on this site and I've found it to be amazing. Your reports and stories as well as Heartcutter's have been great to read. Just wanted to let you know that you'll have new fans in the future.
-Auz |
| #50 .Praetor[152781] |
| c-67-172-163-127.client.comcast.net |
| Thanks Auz and Jacos, I appreciate the comments! |
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